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2015-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

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Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible. My favorite place is 'Baseball Stadium' because the baseball is my favorite sports and I can relieve stree when I watch baseball game in a stadium with cheer shouting loudly. Moreover eating a hamburg with beer watching baseball game outside really hits a spot. So I'm looking forward baseball season....

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],


Your description of your favorite place is very refreshing.

Thank you for sharing it to me. :)


Teacher Sarah


Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible.

My favorite place is \'Baseball Stadium\' because the baseball is my favorite sports

>> My favorite place is the \'Baseball Stadium\' because baseball is my favorite sports. 
 and I can relieve stree when I watch baseball game in a stadium with cheer shouting loudly.

>> I can also relieve my stress every time I watch a baseball game in a stadium with all the loud cheering around.
 Moreover eating a hamburg with beer watching baseball game outside really hits a spot.

>> Moreover, eating a hamburger with beer while watching a baseball game outside really hits the spot.

 So I\'m looking forward baseball season....

>> So I\'m looking forward for the baseball season.

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