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Hello [이름],
Your description of your favorite place is very refreshing.
Thank you for sharing it to me. :)
Teacher Sarah
Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible.
My favorite place is \'Baseball Stadium\' because the baseball is my favorite sports
>> My favorite place is the \'Baseball Stadium\' because baseball is my favorite sports.
and I can relieve stree when I watch baseball game in a stadium with cheer shouting loudly.
>> I can also relieve my stress every time I watch a baseball game in a stadium with all the loud cheering around.
Moreover eating a hamburg with beer watching baseball game outside really hits a spot.
>> Moreover, eating a hamburger with beer while watching a baseball game outside really hits the spot.
So I\'m looking forward baseball season....
>> So I\'m looking forward for the baseball season.
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