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2015-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello! Do you hope that I 'once again' have the right attitude for improving my English? That's a little bit disappointing. I always try to be enthusiastic to learn English in our class. If I'm not passionate to learning English, I didn't even apply to I-Friend program that I talked before. As you know, it's not so long after I wake up everyday, so it makes me hard to roll my brain up (using my head as usual). If you think so, I need to be more passionate then! Be safe. <Essay> Maybe I told you once before. A few years ago, we would believe that if we turn on a fan during a sleep, we can die because of some reasons. It was turned out that there's no scientific reason for it. It was a kind of superstition in Korea. Of course I don't believe these kind of things.

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Good afternoon! Thanks for sharing that superstitious belief. Yes, you told me about that before. Ohh, I don\'t mean that you don\'t have the passion to learn English. I mean that you should have, just like always. I don\'t intend to say that you don\'t have the right attitude. I think you misunderstood my intention. Anyway, please check the sentences that I wrote on your evaluation page. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Hello! >> Correct!Do you hope that I \'once again\' have the right attitude for improving my English? >> Correct! That\'s a little bit disappointing. >> Correct! I always try to be enthusiastic to learn English in our class. >> Correct! If I\'m not passionate to learning English, I didn\'t even apply to I-Friend program that I talked before. >> If I\'m not passionate to learn English, I should not have applied for the I-Friend program that I talked about before. As you know, it\'s not so long after I wake up everyday, so it makes me hard to roll my brain up (using my head as usual). >> As you know, it\'s not so long after I wake up everyday, so it\'s hard for me to use my brain  (using my head as usual). If you think so, I need to be more passionate then! >> Correct!Be safe.>> Correct!<Essay>Maybe I told you once before. >> Correct! A few years ago, we would believe that if we turn on a fan during a sleep, we can die because of some reasons. >> A few years ago, we believed that if we turn on a fan while sleeping, we can die because of some reasons. It was turned out that there\'s no scientific reason for it. >> It turned out that there\'s no scientific reason for it. It was a kind of superstition in Korea. >> Correct! Of course I don\'t believe these kind of things. >> Of course I don\'t believe these kinds of things.

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