homework
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Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
Well, electronic goods which would be sold are quite a good thing.
I bet you could be a good businessman in that. hahaha.
Thanks for today!
Hopefully you will enjoy your day.
Take care! See you again tomorrow.
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you could successfully market any item or service, what would it be and why?
If I could be successful with one item, I would choose electronic goods.
>> correct!
I don\'t really know about it but I can surly use them well.
>> correct! (surely)
Not only me, even babies or elderies are using the lots of electronic goods.
>> Not only me, but even babies or elders are using the lots of electronic goods.
We can not leive without them nowadays.
>> correct! (live)
>> or: It is not easy to live without them nowadays.
It is covenient to use them but we feel very uncomfortable without them.
>> correct!
>> or: We can use them conveniently but it is very uncomfortable without the,.
It is not essencial but they are needed to live better.
>> correct! (essential)
>> or: It is not essential but they are need to make our lives better.
That is why, I would market these goods.
>> correct!
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