homework

2015-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If you could successfully market any item or service, what would it be and why? If I could be successful with one item, I would choose electronic goods. I don't really know about it but I can surly use them well. Not only me, even babies or elderies are using the lots of electronic goods. We can not leive without them nowadays. It is covenient to use them but we feel very uncomfortable without them. It is not essencial but they are needed to live better. That is why, I would market these goods.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

Well, electronic goods which would be sold are quite a good thing.

I bet you could be  a good businessman in that. hahaha.

Thanks for today!

Hopefully you will enjoy your day.
Take care! See you again tomorrow.


Always,
Kathrine ^^


If you could successfully market any item or service, what would it be and why?

If I could be successful with one item, I would choose electronic goods.

>> correct!
 I don\'t really know about it but I can surly use them well.

>> correct! (surely)

Not only me, even babies or elderies are using the lots of electronic goods.

>> Not only me, but even babies or elders are using the lots of electronic goods. 

We can not leive without them nowadays.

>> correct! (live)

>> or: It is not easy to live without them nowadays.

It is covenient to use them but we feel very uncomfortable without them.

>> correct!

>> or: We can use them conveniently but it is very uncomfortable without the,.
 It is not essencial but they are needed to live better.

>> correct! (essential)

>> or: It is not essential but they are need to make our lives better.

That is why, I would market these goods.

>> correct!

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