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2015-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

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The one thing that I can't live without is my smartphone. I use it everyday to talk to my friends, read an e-book or an e-mail, surf the Internet and shop on-line, et cetera. I am very much attached to my phone and it is hard to imagine living without it. In today's class, I would like to talk about the new feature that facebook has implanted on their system. http://www.bbc.co.uk/newsbeat/31641216 I think this new feature could be very helpful to help people who are devastated and need help. Have a good day and I'll talk to you later :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Em!^^

Thanks for the link. Let\'s talk about it later tonight in

our class. :)

Teacher Sarah

The one thing that I can\'t live without is my smartphone.

>> CORRECT
I use it everyday to talk to my friends, read an e-book or an e-mail, surf the Internet and shop on-line, et cetera.

>> CORRECT
I am very much attached to my phone and it is hard to imagine living without it.
>> CORRECT
In today\'s class, I would like to talk about the new feature that facebook has implanted on their system.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/newsbeat/31641216

I think this new feature could be very helpful to help people who are devastated and need help.
Have a good day and I\'ll talk to you later :)

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