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Hi Em!
I was drooling while reading your restaurant/food review. Haha
You described it really well. I definitely want to try it! :)
Teacher Sarah
When I am stressed out, I like to eat spicy food.
>> CORRECT
OR: Eating spicy food is my way of relieving stress.
There is a restaurant franchise that is specialized in spicy squid that I would like to introduce.
>>There is a restaurant franchise that specializes in spicy squid that I would like to introduce.
OR: I would like to talk about this restaurant that is famous for their spicy squid dish.
They have marinated spicy squid, chicken or pork menu with cheese pondue.
>> They have marinated spicy squid, chicken, or pork on their menu with cheese fondue.
You can dip your meal in the pondue pot and the taste of hot cheese smooths the spiciness.
>> You can dip the meat in a the fondue pot and the taste of hot cheese smoothens out/ balances the spiciness.
In today\'s class, I would like to talk about the Indian girl who was brutally raped and died.
Here is the link below.
http://edition.cnn.com/2015/03/03/asia/india-rape-comment-outrage/index.html
Have a good day and talk to you soon :)
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