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Hi Erine I always feel 20minuite that we call very short. today. We just have talking about my yesterday. But I was happy because of you^^ ---------------------------------- I think balanced nutrition is the most important. I prefer to eat vegetable than to meat. But I tried to eat meat to get a protein. It is needed to have proper body weigh and keep a good body shape. we have to have balanced with meat and vegetable diet and do regular exercise for our health and enough to have break time. It's so simple but is difficult to practice.

Hello there, [이름]. Time will never be enough for people who have fun and sense talking with each other. I am sure that 20 minutes or even an hour cannot satisfy both of us because we talk about a lot of things!^>^ It may take us forever to finish our conversation. Kkkk Anyhow, the essay that you wrote was about how to be healthy. However, it doesn\'t really follow the instruction from the homework. The homework\'s instructions is to argue for or against becoming a vegetarian. So, you could have written like as if you are a vegetarian or you don\'t want to be a vegetarian. Let\'s talk about this in class.^>^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi Erine >> CorrectI always feel 20minuite that we call very short. >> I always feel a 20 minute call is very short.today. We just have talking about my yesterday. >> Today, we have just talked about what happened to me yesterday.But I was happy because of you^^ >> CorrectI think balanced nutrition is the most important. >> I think a balanced nutrition is important.I prefer to eat vegetable than to meat. >> I prefer to eat vegetables than meat.But I tried to eat meat to get a protein. >> But I tried to eat meat to get protein.It is needed to have proper body weigh and keep a good body shape. >> It is needed to have a proper body weight and keep a good body shape.we have to have balanced with meat and vegetable diet and do regular exercise for our health and enough to have break time. >> We have to balance meat and vegetable in our diet, do a regualer exercise and have enough break time for our health.It\'s so simple but is difficult to practice. >> Correct