Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
These are my answers.
1. a
2. a
3. a
4. b
5. c
6. b
7. a
8. b
9. b
10. c
11. b
12. b
12. c
This is my essay.
I lose a umbrella at two days ago.
Because i had playing the mobile game on the subway when i taken down the subway.
I forgot it that i had clasping a umbrella.
Immediately i helpped staff of subway what find a umbrella on subway.
But they didn't find a umbrella.
To this day I'm still so sad.
강사 첨삭
Hello MR. [이름],
I am sorry to hear that you lost your umbrella.
I think you can\'t do anything this time but to buy one.
Cheer up!
Don\'t cry over a spilled milk.
Next time, you need to be careful in using the subway.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
These are my answers.
>> CORRECT 1. a
>> B2. a
>> C3. a
>> CORRECT 4. b
>> A5. c
>> CORRECT 6. b
>> CORRECT 7. a
>> CORRECT 8. b
>> CORRECT 9. b
>> CORRECT 10. c
>> CORRECT 11. b
>> CORRECT 12. b
>> CORRECT 13. c
>> CORRECT This is my essay.
>> CORRECT I lose a umbrella at two days ago.
>> I lost my umbrella two days ago.Because i had playing the mobile game on the subway when i taken down the subway.
>> I was busy playing a game on my cellphone when I was in the subway. I forgot it that i had clasping a umbrella.
>> I forgot that I was clasping an umbrella.
OR >> I forgot that I was holding an umbrella.Immediately i helpped staff of subway what find a umbrella on subway.
>> I immediately asked the subway staff to help me find my umbrella.But they didn\'t find a umbrella.
>> Unfortunately, they didn\'t find my umbrella.To this day I\'m still so sad.
>> I feel sad today.
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