Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday!
I know that you really are doing your best to keep on getting better [이름].
I actually notice that you are careful with your articles not only when talking but also when writing.
I appreciate that. You know that you are getting better right?
The errors that you often commit before are lesser these days.
But of course, there are still some times when we commit mistakes.
Yes, I will do my best to help you be better.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Good morning!
>> Correct!
You said, thank you for spending time with me, then I\'ll also say I appreciate with your effort to improve my skill.
>> You said, thank you for spending time with me, then I\'ll also say I appreciate your effort to improve my skill.You mentioned my grammar errors, so I want to ask something.
>> Correct!
Do I commit the same mistakes that I did before?
>> Correct!
I always try to be careful about articles as possible as I can, but maybe I commited several times, don\'t I?
>> I always try to be careful about my articles, but maybe I committed errors several times, didn\'t I?
Whenever I make a mistake, please notice me.
>> Whenever I make a mistake, please inform me.
It\'s going to be really helpful for my progress, I\'m sure.
>> Correct!
See you then!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I think the invention and rise of computers are the best thing of the world progress.
>> I think the invention and rise of computers are the best among the world progresses.
We almost always use computers in whole daily life like when we buy something in a store or when we use public transportation.
>> We usually use computers in our daily life like when we buy something in a store or when we use public transportation.
If our ancestor didn\'t invent the computer, our life must be more uncomfortable.
>> Correct!
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