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2015-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Can you tell me about something you would happily do again? I would like to say learing English would be my happiness to do again. English was a huge wall that I couldn't overcome. I hadn't imagined that I could communicate with foreigners. It was hard to speak one English word however I can do it npw. This brings me alot of changes. It helps me to enjoy the life and be confident. If I were born again, I would learn English happily again.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Ms. [이름]!

English is like a huge wall which is very difficult to climb over.

You really have to work hard to get on top.

And you are already on top so do your best to be there.

Thanks again for today and see you tomorrow!

Take care!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Can you tell me about something you would happily do again?

I would like to say learing English would be my happiness to do again.

>> I would like to say learing English would make me happy  again.
 English was a huge wall that I couldn\'t overcome.

>> English was like a huge wall which I couldn\'t overcome.
 I hadn\'t imagined that I could communicate with foreigners.

>> correct!
 It was hard to speak one English word however I can do it npw.

>> correct!  (now)
 This brings me alot of changes.

>>  correct!

>> or: It brought me a lot of work.

It helps me to enjoy the life and be confident.

>> It helps me to enjoy life and be confident.
 If I were born again, I would learn English happily again.

>> correct!


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