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2015-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

These are my answers. 1. A 2. The 3. The 4. Nothing 5. An 6. A 7. Nothing 8. An, Nothing 9. The 10. A This is my essay. Recently, I had been playing the games. These are 'c'crash of clans' and 's'summoners war'. These are very interesting games. 'Crash of clans' is strategic game of the mobile. 'Summoners war' is same game too. But it has addiction of game. I controlled time of playing game, but it is not simple. I will play the game when i have free time.

강사 첨삭

Hello MR. [이름], Wow! I didn\'t know that you are so addicted on online games like the clash of clans. I heard from my friends that this online game is really good and people got addicted to it. Anyway, I\'m happy that you are playing this kind of game for you to release stress from work but don\'t get addicted to it. Thank you for doing your homework. Keep it up! Teacher Sophia   Here are your corrections: These are my answers. >>  1. A >> CORRECT  2. The >> CORRECT  OR >> A3. The >> CORRECT  4. Nothing >> THE5. An >> THE6. A >> NOTHING7. Nothing >> A/THE8. An, Nothing >> AN / THE9. The >> NOTHING10. A >> CORRECT  This is my essay. >> CORRECT  Recently, I had been playing the games. >> CORRECT  These are \'c\'crash of clans\' and \'s\'summoners war\'. >> These are the \'c\'clash of clans\' and \'s\'summoners war\'.These are very interesting games. >> CORRECT  \'Crash of clans\' is strategic game of the mobile. >> \"Clash of clans\" is a strategic game on the mobile.\'Summoners war\' is same game too. >> \"Summoners war\" is the same as the \"Clash of clans\"But it has addiction of game. >> You will be addicted to the game.I controlled time of playing game, but it is not simple. >> I controlled myself in playing the game but it is not easy.I will play the game when i have free time. >> I will only play the game if I have a free time.

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