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we already know that the progress of technology keeps mankind rich and the economic development may secure abundance our life. but human planty that science produces caused incontinent production and spending. as a result, the waste is overflow, a pollution raise destriction of environment. on the other hand, past history presents our life of today and might be connected with our future. literary works may give us the another experience and get the traction that understand me and the new world. but nowdays, it doesn’t become large moneymaking any more so it doesn’t get many interests by people. most of people considers that no competitiveness. learning history, literature doesn’t earn the money. nevertheless, what is the reasion which we must do history and literature? through the history and literature, we can find and discover a new point of our life. it helps to have more important value than money and makes us a deeper person. someday, if you become CEO, you must put more value to society and employee than company‘s short term benefits. when is affiliated, there is the answer in literature, history

Hello there Jane! ^^ Good job in answering your first composition writing homework. ^^ You presented your opinion quite well, now most of the corrections made were to help with the comprehensibility and  coherence, although, I would like to give you some reminders or points to consider: > Always remember to capitalize the first letter of the first word in every new sentence. > A good tip in writing English is to use simple vocabulary to get your point across.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   we already know that the progress of technology keeps mankind rich and the economic development may secure abundance our life. >> CORRECT just capitalize the first letter of the word \"we\". but human planty that science produces caused incontinent production and spending. as a result, the waste is overflow, a pollution raise destriction of environment. >> However, the pursuance of science produces uncontrolled  waste or resources, resulting in pollution that leads to the destruction of the environment. on the other hand, past history presents our life of today and might be connected with our future.  >> On the other hand, our lives today is the result of our past and our history might also connect to our future.   literary works may give us the another experience and get the traction that understand me and the new world. >> Literary works give us a chance for new experiences and traction for understanding. but nowdays, it doesn’t become large moneymaking any more so it doesn’t get many interests by people. >> Although nowadays, people aren\'t interested in literature because there is no money to be made in it. most of people considers that no competitiveness. learning history, literature doesn’t earn the money. >> Most people think that studying liberal arts like literature and history doesn\'t earn much money and lacks competitiveness. nevertheless,  what is the reasion which we must do history and literature? >> Nevertheless, why must we study history and literature? through the history and literature, we can find and discover a new point of our life. >> Through history and literature, we can discover something new in our lives. it helps to have more important value than money and makes us a deeper person. >> It helps us become deeper persons and to place value in things other than money. someday, if you become CEO, you must put more value to society and employee than company‘s short term benefits. >> For example, if one day, you become CEO of a company, you would put more value in society and employees than the company\'s gains.   when is affiliated, there is the answer in literature, history >> In this aspect, there are answers in literature and history.