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2015-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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A mirthful day? Well, it's little tired to me but I'll try to be mirthful. :) I'm really happy that you really think so. it was quite hard to wake up on time today, but I barely made it. I appreciate your advice which could be helpful to get along with foreigners. The meeting for whole members is going to begin on Thursday dinner time. I'm looking forward to meet them, and I'm a little bit nervous too. However, I could deal with it very well thanks to your tips especially your word, dans. Is it right spelling? haha See you on Wednesday <Essay> The health care system is really confortable in Korea. We go to a hospital, we can get a medical supply without a complicating procedure and it's hugely cheaper than other countries. There are many skilled docters too. I heard that a lot of foreigners come to Korea for medical operations.

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Good afternoon! Thanks for sharing your ideas about the health care system in your country. I am glad that I was able to help you. Please go over the corrections I gave you. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ A mirthful day? >> Correct! Well, it\'s little tired to me but I\'ll try to be mirthful. :) >> Well, it\'s a little tiring for me but I\'ll try to be mirthful. :) OR>> Well, I\'m a little tired but I\'ll try to be mirthful. :)I\'m really happy that you really think so. >> Correct! it was quite hard to wake up on time today, but I barely made it. >> It was quite hard to wake up on time today, but I barely made it. I appreciate your advice which could be helpful to get along with foreigners. >> I appreciate your advice which could help me get along with foreigners. The meeting for whole members is going to begin on Thursday dinner time. >> The meeting for all the members is going to be on Thursday, dinner time. I\'m looking forward to meet them, and I\'m a little bit nervous too. >> I\'m looking forward to meeting them, and I\'m a little bit nervous too. However, I could deal with it very well thanks to your tips especially your word, dans. >> Correct! >> Dans? What is it? Hahaha. I think you forgot what I told you. Well, I won\'t repeat it. ^__^ Is it right spelling? haha >> Is it the right spelling? OR>> Does it have the right spelling?See you on Wednesday>> See you on Wednesday.<Essay>The health care system is really confortable in Korea. >> The health care system is really comfortable in Korea. We go to a hospital, we can get a medical supply without a complicating procedure and it\'s hugely cheaper than other countries. >> When we go to a hospital, we can get medical supply without complicated procedures and it\'s hugely cheaper than other countries. There are many skilled docters too. >> There are many skilled doctors too. I heard that a lot of foreigners come to Korea for medical operations. >> Correct!  

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