Homework.

2015-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Hi Kris! Today is first time with you. In the future, I hope to spend enjoyable time with me. haha ^^ Anyway, I saw a homework. But actually I don't understand well... To answer the homework, The situation of the embarrssing that I experienced is going up the stage. Because I had stagefright. It is difficult to say in front of people. No matter who is... So my voice is going small and quaking.. I really want to overcome it... haha. Good night!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you today? Thank you for making your homework. I really appreciate it. You can can overcome your stage fright by having confidence in yourself, my dear. :) By the way, please study your corrections below, okay. :) Have a great day ahead and take care always! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   Today is first time with you. >> Today  is my first time with you. In the future, I hope to spend enjoyable time with me. haha ^^ >> In the future, I hope that you will spend enjoyable time with me. haha ^^Anyway, I saw a homework. >> Correct But actually I don\'t understand well... >> But actually, I don\'t understand it well. To answer the homework, The situation of the embarrssing that I experienced is going up the stage. >> To answer the homework. The embarassing situation that I experiences was going up the stage. Because I had stagefright. >> Correct It is difficult to say in front of people. >> Correct  No matter who is... So my voice is going small and quaking.. I really want to overcome it... haha. >> So, my went small and went quaking. I really want to overcome it. haha

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