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2015-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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5 years ago, how do you think you would have answered the question: where do you see yourself in 5 years? If it's not where you are today, are you happy with the changes? I didn't really make the plan what I am done 5years ago. I thught that I would work at the same school and teach kids after 5years and I would get married with sombody but things are totally diffrent from what I thounght. I am still single to be free hehe and I have been working at the different places. I realized many things from the past 5years. Maybe I should make some plan for the future for now then if I have this kind of question, I could answer clearly. My future is not yet clear butI am still satisfied what I am doing now. I can feel that I am still learning from my experiences. Thanks for making me think all the time!! I can say that you are a really great teacher. You make me better person not only teaching the language. Thanks alot! Have a good day and take care!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

Thanks a bunch for your message. I really appreciate it.
I think we are in the same situation. I also di not make a plan 5 years ago so I am sure also if I am happy now or not.

maybe we should really need to start making plans. kkk

Thanks again for today and see you tomorrow!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


5 years ago, how do you think you would have answered the question: where do you see yourself in 5 years? If it\'s not where you are today, are you happy with the changes?

I didn\'t really make the plan what I am done 5years ago.

>> I didn\'t really make the plan on what I have to do 5 years ago.
 I thught that I would work at the same school and teach kids after 5years and I would get married with sombody but things are totally diffrent from what I thounght.

>> correct! (somebody/thought)
 I am still single to be free hehe and I have been working at the different places.

>> I am still single and free (hehe) and I have been working at a different place.
 I realized many things from the past 5years.

>> correct!

Maybe I should make some plan for the future for now then if I have this kind of question, I could answer clearly.

>> Maybe I should make some plans for the future for now then if I have this kind of question, I could answer clearly.
 My future is not yet clear but I am still satisfied what I am doing now.

>> My future is not yet clear but I am still satisfied with what I am doing now.
 I can feel that I am still learning from my experiences.

>> correct! 
 Thanks for making me think all the time!!

>> correct! 
 I can say that you are a really great teacher.

>> I can say that you are really a great teacher.
 You make me better person not only teaching the language.

>>  You make me better person not only teaching the language.
 Thanks alot!

>> correct! 
 Have a good day and take care!

>> correct!

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