Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, Teacher Marie.
Today, I've got a big favor to ask.
I'm wrting a paper to have a presentation next week.
Could you read my some sentences?
That's not that long.^^
This paper covers three articles in the book, Confucianism and Human Rights.
The first one was written by Sumner B. Twiss.
And the other two articles were written by Tu Weiming, the editor of this book, and Louis Henkin.
Sumner B. Twiss starts with the understanding that human rights are the set of rights articulated in the 1948 Universal Declaration of Human Rights and in the two subsequent and related covenants.
This process is divided into three distinctive generations.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! It\'s no big deal! I\'m happy to help you out in any way that I can. :) Your sentences were almost perfect! Wow! Good job. I made a few corrections below so please review them. Good luck with the presentation!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good afternoon, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! Today, I\'ve got a big favor to ask.
>> CORRECT! I\'m wrting a paper to have a presentation next week.
>> I\'m writing a paper for a presentation next week.
Could you read my some sentences?
>> Could you read and review some of my sentences?That\'s not that long.^^
>> They\'re not that long. This paper covers three articles in the book, Confucianism and Human Rights.
>> This paper covers three articles in the book \"Confucianism and Human Rights\".
The first one was written by Sumner B. Twiss.
>> CORRECT! And the other two articles were written by Tu Weiming, the editor of this book, and Louis Henkin.
>> CORRECT! Sumner B. Twiss starts with the understanding that human rights are the set of rights articulated in the 1948 Universal Declaration of Human Rights and in the two subsequent and related covenants.
>> CORRECT! This process is divided into three distinctive generations.
>> CORRECT!
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