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2015-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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March 11th is “Johnny Appleseed Day.” Write about apples and their benefits. if Johnny Appleseed Day is too much sold out to apples. and They are like a his apples. he's very a kind and peace wish with us so..This apples enough delicious. never It tastes bad.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

 

I like apples too.


Some reminders:

1. Capitalize the first letter of your sentence.

example: He\'s very kind. (not he\'s very kind)


2. If-clause is incomplete so you need to put an independent clause.

example: If apples are sold out in Johnny Appleseed Day, people like his apples. (If apples are sold out in Johnny Appleseed Day- is incomplete)


Teacher Venus^^


if Johnny Appleseed Day is too much sold out to apples.and They are like a his apples.

>>>If apples are sold out in Johnny Appleseed Day, people like his apples.

he\'s very a kind and peace wish with us

>>>He was very kind and he wished peace for us.

so..This apples enough delicious.

>>>So these apples are delicious enough.

 

never It tastes bad.

>>>It never tastes bad.

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