homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I like apples too.
Some reminders:
1. Capitalize the first letter of your sentence.
example: He\'s very kind. (not he\'s very kind)
2. If-clause is incomplete so you need to put an independent clause.
example: If apples are sold out in Johnny Appleseed Day, people like his apples. (If apples are sold out in Johnny Appleseed Day- is incomplete)
Teacher Venus^^
if Johnny Appleseed Day is too much sold out to apples.and They are like a his apples.
>>>If apples are sold out in Johnny Appleseed Day, people like his apples.
he\'s very a kind and peace wish with us
>>>He was very kind and he wished peace for us.
so..This apples enough delicious.
>>>So these apples are delicious enough.
never It tastes bad.
>>>It never tastes bad.
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