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Hello [이름],

Wishes do come true so just keep on dreaming.

Hi Jeny^^

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Thank you for giving homework to me.
>>Thnk you for giving me a homework.

I hope you your days good.

>>I hope that you\'re having a good day.
See you soon.

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Well, my hope for my own future is my family.

>>Well, I am hoping for a better future for my family.
My family is my power to work happy and endure my fatigue.

>>My family gives me the power to work and endure fatigue.
Before I was married with my husband, I want to be a great person.

>>Before I got married, I wanted to become a great person.
I wanted to work big hospital and to promote as to be a head nurse.

>>I wanted to work in a big hospital and be promoted as a head nurse.
And I also dreamed to be rich.

>>I also dreamt of becoming rich.

 But after I got marry and be a mother, my mind was all change.

>>But after getting married and becoming a mother, I changed my mind.
Now, I am working harder than before for my family not for only me.

>>Now, I am working hard for my family.
And I try to study English in my leisure time.

>>And I try to study English for my leisure time.

The reason why I am always thinking my family.

>>That is why, I am always thinking of my family.

I don\' t want to waste my time.

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I am waiting another opportunities to work better place.

>>Ia m waiting for another opportunity to work in  a better place.

 I can\' t suggest the right picture you can see.

>>I hope can picture out, what I am trying to say.

 But those kinds of things are my hope.

>>But those things are just my wishes.