Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe your ideal town or city, why you would want to live there, and what you would do there.
I enjoy to live in Seoul.
Seoul is a wonderful place to live.
Wouldn't it be nice If there is not pollution problem,
In spite of air pollution, I remain satisfied with Seoul life.
I like Seoul life because Seoul is well designed and is equipped with public utilities and modern amenities.
I want to enjoy these utilities and amenities.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir [이름]!
I am aslo satisfied with the place where I live in. I can see a huge plantation of strawberries in front of our house. I can also experience solemnity at night since people in the neigborhood are disciplined. However, they are starting to develop the place so a lot of establishments are being built just around the strawberry farm. So it\'s sad because there is a big possibility that the good view that I see everyday could disappear in the near future. Well, I really hope not!
Anyway, thanks for sending this. See you again tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee
Describe your ideal town or city, why you would want to live there, and what you would do there.I enjoy to live in Seoul.
>>> Correct!Seoul is a wonderful place to live.
>>> Seoul is a wonderful place to live in.Wouldn\'t it be nice If there is not pollution problem, >>> It would be nice if there is not pollution problem.
In spite of air pollution, I remain satisfied with Seoul life.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: In spite of air pollution, I remain satisfied with my life in Seoul.I like Seoul life because Seoul is well designed and is equipped with public utilities and modern amenities.
>>> I like the life in Seoul because this city is well-designed and has public utilities and modern amenities.I want to enjoy these utilities and amenities.
>>> Correct!
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