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2015-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

학생이 쓴 원문

I think, the most impowertant subject in elementary school is friendship. because, friendship which made in elementary school cintinue his the whole life. And another important subject in elementary school is a teacher. beacause, teacher's lesson and behave are very important that a man make a character building.

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Good morning! Thanks for doing your homework sir [이름]. You finally wrote one. ^__^ I totally agree with your ideas. I corrected your sentences so please go over them. I hope I understood them correctly. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ I think, the most impowertant subject in elementary school is friendship. >> I think the most important subject in elementary school is friendship.because, friendship which made in elementary school cintinue his the whole life. >> Because friendships made in elementary school continues for the whole life.And another important subject in elementary school is a teacher. >> And another important subject in elementary school is the teacher.beacause, teacher\'s lesson and behave are very important that a man make a character building. >> Because the teacher\'s lessons and behaviors are very important in building a man\'s character.

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