Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, Teacher Marie.
Thank you for your advice to improve my pronunciation.
To make a successful presentation, I'll practice it hard this weekend.
Below is my homework for today.
In not less than 10 sentences, answer the following:
"What makes your parents special? Give specific details."
Today, I'll talk about my parents' great sacrifices for me.
They helped me get a higher education throughout financial and moral support.
Their attitude was very special to me.
Because I had grow up in patriarchal environment.
From what I remembered, my grandparents gave a negative response about my higher education.
I could enter and graduate the university successfully thanks to their positive stand.
Moreover, they have took care of my son to help my work and school life.
I couldn't do anything without their support.
I really admire their love and sacrifices.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thank you so much for reading my comment and following my advice. :) I appreciate it. I hope your parents could read this composition. They would be so touched by what you said here. The apple doesn\'t fall too far from the tree. So I\'m pretty sure the reason that you are a wonderful person is because of the way your parents raised you. Keep on shining!
Please review my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good afternoon, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT!Thank you for your advice to improve my pronunciation.
>> CORRECT!To make a successful presentation, I\'ll practice it hard this weekend.
>> CORRECT!Below is my homework for today.>> CORRECT!Today, I\'ll talk about my parents\' great sacrifices for me.
>> CORRECT!They helped me get a higher education throughout financial and moral support.
>> CORRECT!
>> throughTheir attitude was very special to me.
>> They were very special to me.
Because I had grow up in patriarchal environment.
>> CORRECT!
>> grew upFrom what I remembered, my grandparents gave a negative response about my higher education.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> From what I remembered, my grandparents were against my studies.I could enter and graduate the university successfully thanks to their positive stand.
>> I was able to enter and graduate from the university successfully thanks to their positive stand.
Moreover, they have took care of my son to help my work and school life.
>> Moreover, they have taken care of my son to help me out with my work and school life.
I couldn\'t do anything without their support.
>> CORRECT!I really admire their love and sacrifices.
>> CORRECT!
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