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Hello [이름],
Thank you for sharing your wonderful experience in Saipan.
I think it is indeed a paradise. Most islands located in the
Pacific Ocean have beautiful coastlines. :)
Teacher Sarah
Describe a place you will never forget.
It\'s none other than Saipan island.
>> CORRECT
OR: My most memorable place would have to be Saipan Island.
Last autumn our big family including family in law went there to celebrate my mother and father in law\'s 60th birthday.
>> Last autumn, our big family including my family-in-law went there to celebrate my parents-in-law\'s 60th birthday.
The most satisfied thing is that everything was fully equipped in resort inside, so we could enjoy water park, sports and meals freely.
>> The most satisfying thing is that the resort was fully equipped so we could enjoy the water park, sports, and meals freely.
Our family were so satisfied with Saipan, so I will never forget there.
>>Our family was very satisfied with our experience in Saipan so I will never forget that place.
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