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2015-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

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Describe a place you will never forget. It's none other than Saipan island. Last autumn our big family including family in law went there to celebrate my mother and father in law's 60th birthday. The most satisfied thing is that everything was fully equipped in resort inside, so we could enjoy water park, sports and meals freely. Our family were so satisfied with Saipan, so I will never forget there.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],


Thank you for sharing your wonderful experience in Saipan.

I think it is indeed a paradise. Most islands located in the

Pacific Ocean have beautiful coastlines. :)


Teacher Sarah


Describe a place you will never forget.

It\'s none other than Saipan island.

>> CORRECT

OR: My most memorable place would have to be Saipan Island.
 Last autumn our big family including family in law went there to celebrate my mother and father in law\'s 60th birthday.

>> Last autumn, our big family including my family-in-law went there to celebrate my parents-in-law\'s 60th birthday.
 The most satisfied thing is that everything was fully equipped in resort inside, so we could enjoy water park, sports and meals freely.

>> The most satisfying thing is that the resort was fully equipped so we could enjoy the water park, sports, and meals freely.
 Our family were so satisfied with Saipan, so I will never forget there.

>>Our family was very satisfied with our experience in Saipan so I will never forget that place.  

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