HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Well they say, \'life is unfair\'.
I think everyone at least once in their
entire life was treated unfairly. This
world we live in is tough so we just need
to get our way around and through it. :)
Teacher Sarah
Tell about a time when you were treated unfairly.
One episode just rings a bell.
>> One experience rings a bell.
Last fall, our family went to \'Everland\' very early morning and standed in line for abt 30 mins to enter the park quickly.
>> Last fall, our family went to Everland. We went there very early in the morning and stood in line for about 30 minutes so we could enter the park quickly.
At last open time was getting close, but back then, I saw a family who didn\'t stand in line entered to a park silently with staff\'s help.
>> As the opening time was getting close, I saw a family who didn\'t actually stand in the line but managed to enter the park with a staff\'s help.
I guessed they are aquaintance or friend of that staff and felt unfair.
>> I think they are friends or acquaintances with the staff and I felt it was just unfair.
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