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2015-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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My homework is "The better Superhero: Batman or Spiderman" But I don't know well about them.So I'll write about another topic. Today's topic is new friends. On March second I go to school first as a 9th grade. So I felt exited and nervous. When I arrive my class, there are 36 students and there are friends that I know. But there are other students that I don't know. So I thought that I will close to them. At first, my beside friend and I was not close to each other. So we didn't tell each other. But we know face each other. Because my friend know her so we can each other sometimes. So, I tell to her. I hide face so I can't tell to other well. But now I can tell to her easily. Then we talk about many things for about 2weeks. And we closed each other, And we make other friends, too. At first, my classmates are very quiet. We don't know well each other and awkward. But, now our class is noising gradually. I like my classmates and I want to close friends that I didn't talk with.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Lily!   Wow! You did your homework! Thank you so much for doing so.. Here is the correction.. Talk to you tomorrow.. T. Jennifer My homework is \"The better Superhero: Batman or Spiderman\" But I don\'t know well about them.So I\'ll write about another topic. Today\'s topic is new friends. >> Correct! On March second I go to school first as a 9th grade. >>On March second I went to school the first time as a 9th grader.  So I felt exited and nervous. When I arrive my class, there are 36 students and there are friends that I know. But there are other students that I don\'t know. >> So I felt exited and nervous. When I arrived at my class, there were 36 students and there were friends that I know. But there are other students that I don\'t know. So I thought that I will close to them. At first, my beside friend and I was not close to each other. So we didn\'t tell each other. But we know face each other. Because my friend know her so we can each other sometimes. >>So I thought that I will be close to them. At first, my friend beside me and I were not close . So we didn\'t talk to each other. But we are familiar with each other. Because my friend knows her so we sometimes see each other.So, I tell to her. I hide face so I can\'t tell to other well. But now I can tell to her easily. Then we talk about many things for about 2weeks. And we closed each other, And we make other friends, too. >> So, I talked with her. At first, I could not look at her directly but now, I can talk with her easily. We talked about many things for two weeks. Now, we are close. We made other friends too.  At first, my classmates are very quiet. We don\'t know well each other and awkward. But, now our class is noising gradually. I like my classmates and I want to close friends that I didn\'t talk with. >> At first, my classmates were very quiet. We didn\'t know  one another well and felt awkward. But, now our class is becoming noisy gradually. I like my classmates and I want to be close friends with theose I have not talked with yet.

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