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2015-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good Morning, Teacher Marie. I was really happy to speak with you today.^^ After I read your comments, I had a question. How can I find out those 7,000 words? I'd like to study them, if I could get to find. In not less than 10 sentences, answer the following: What's one thing in your home you couldn't live without? Why? Of course, I couldn't live without my family. However, today, I'll talk about my favorite home appliances. The most helpful home appliance is a garbage disposing device. In Korea, people have to throw away food garbage by a standard plastic garbage bag which costs in accordance with the volume. This is inconvenient, also costs some money. I don't need to experience this because I have a garbage disposing device. It makes my kitchen clean and makes me free from going out to throw away them. Therefore, I cannot help liking it.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Well, if you are really interested in those 7,000 words, check out http://www.macmillandictionary.com/. It has a great system called red words. The 7,000 words that make up the core vocabulary are in red. When you hear or see a new word, look it up in the Macmillan dictionary. If the word is in red, then it is part of the core vocabulary and you need to know this word! Good luck! ^^ Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good Morning, Teacher Marie.>> CORRECT! I was really happy to speak with you today.^^ >> CORRECT!After I read your comments, I had a question. >> CORRECT!How can I find out those 7,000 words? >> How can I find out what those 7,000 words are?I\'d like to study them, if I could get to find. >> I\'d like to study them if I could find them.  Of course, I couldn\'t live without my family. >> CORRECT!However, today, I\'ll talk about my favorite home appliances. >> CORRECT!The most helpful home appliance is a garbage disposing device. >> CORRECT! >> disposalIn Korea, people have to throw away food garbage by a standard plastic garbage bag which costs in accordance with the volume. >> CORRECT! >> by = usingThis is inconvenient, also costs some money. >> Not only is this inconvenient, it also costs a bit of money. I don\'t need to experience this because I have a garbage disposing device. >> I don\'t need to do this becayse I have a garbage disposal device.It makes my kitchen clean and makes me free from going out to throw away them. >> It helps keep my kitchen clean and I don\'t need to go out to throw away the trash.Therefore, I cannot help liking it. >> CORRECT! OR >> That\'s why I cannot help but like it.      

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