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2015-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi again Jessie! You're right. I should laugh at mistakes I make, but I'm always scared of making mistakes and it disturb me to speak more fluently. However I believe that I could be getting better now. I hope it comes true soon. <Essay> Oh, you know what? The second homework of the writing class was to write about three favorite places that I usually go to, and you're asking the same thing. However I'll put down the other place that I didn't mention in the writing assignment. My favorite place is my home. I think you're the same, aren't you? kk If there's nothing I need to do, I'll stay at home all days.

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Good morning [이름]! Thanks for sharing your favorite place. You actually got that right too! One of my favorite places is our house. ^_^ Anyway, don\'t be too afraid of committing mistakes [이름]. It is part of learning. So you just have to enjoy speaking English. See you soon! ~T. Jessie~ Hi again Jessie! >> Correct!You\'re right. >> Correct! I should laugh at mistakes I make, but I\'m always scared of making mistakes and it disturb me to speak more fluently. >> I should laugh at my mistakes, but I\'m always scared of making mistakes and it disturbs me to speak more fluently. However I believe that I could be getting better now. >> However I believe that I am getting better now. I hope it comes true soon.>> Correct!<Essay>Oh, you know what? >> Correct! The second homework of the writing class was to write about three favorite places that I usually go to, and you\'re asking the same thing. >> The second homework for my writing class was to write about three favorite places that I usually go to, and you\'re asking the same thing. However I\'ll put down the other place that I didn\'t mention in the writing assignment. >> Correct! My favorite place is my home. >> Correct! I think you\'re the same, aren\'t you? kk >> I think we\'re the same, aren\'t we? If there\'s nothing I need to do, I\'ll stay at home all days. >> If there\'s nothing I need to do, I\'ll stay at home everyday.

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