homework

What's one thing in your home you couldn't live without? why? I couldn't live without TV. TV is most important appliance in my home. TV makes me excited, pleased, sad, fun. I see news with TV. My TV didn't work this morning. So I called service center. My TV was repaired this morning. But I don't watch TV every day. When I go camping weekend, I can't watch TV. Because there is not TV in the camping field. I like life without TV two days a week. But I need TV other days.

Hello Clover! You did a very good job here! I\'m so impressed because your grammar corrections were minimal. You only forgot a few words like the articles and some prepositions. Kindly take note of that. :) Keep it up! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  I couldn\'t live without TV. >> CORRECT!TV is the most important appliance in my home. >> CORRECT!TV makes me feel excited, pleased, sad, fun. >> CORRECT!I see news with TV. >> I watch the news on TV. My TV didn\'t work this morning. >> CORRECT!So I called the service center. >> CORRECT!My TV was repaired this morning. >> CORRECT!But I don\'t watch TV every day. >> CORRECT!When I go camping on the weekend, I can\'t watch TV. >> CORRECT!Because there is not TV in the camping field. >> CORRECT! >> not = noI like life without TV two days a week. >> CORRECT!But I need TV other days. >> But I need TV during the other days. OR >> But I need to watch TV during the other days.