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1. A : I am going to ivest this fund. B : No. Don't put all your eggs in one basket. 2. A : I can't believe you sold your house. You very love your house. B : I was broke. So I am going to move to smaller house. Drastic times call for drastic. 3. Audiences encore to the singer when the concert has just finished. That occasion, an emcee say that. "Elvis has left the building. Thank you." I will watch Engilsh movies three a week.

Hi Clover! I really enjoyed reading your composition because I know that you exerted a lot of effort in writing this. You gave some really good examples too. I think you forgot some important words in your sentences here so please review them.  Kindly check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ 1. A : I am going to ivest this fund. >> CORRECT! >> investB : No. Don\'t put all your eggs in one basket. >> CORRECT!2. A : I can\'t believe you sold your house. >> CORRECT! You very love your house. >> You love your house so much.  OR >> You really love your house. B : I was broke. >> CORRECT! So I am going to move to a smaller house. >> CORRECT!Drastic times call for drastic measures. >> CORRECT!3. Audiences encore to the singer when the concert has just finished. >> The audience wanted an encore from the singer after the concert had finished. OR  >> The audience would want an encore from the singer after the concert ends. That occasion, an emcee say that. >> At that moment, the emcee said, OR >> At that moment, the emcee can say,\"Elvis has left the building. >> CORRECT! Thank you.\" >> CORRECT!I will watch Engilsh movies three a week. >> I will watch three English movies every week.