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What is your opinion about women in the military?
I think women in the military are necessary because every works fall into work which man can do better than woman and work which woman can do better than man, even if it relates to military.
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Hi [이름],
That\'s a good point you shared today. Our gender differences
don\'t necessarily define the quality of work we can produce. :)
Teacher Sarah
What is your opinion about women in the military?
I think women in the military are necessary because every works fall into work which man can do better than woman and work which woman can do better than man, even if it relates to military.
>>I think women in the military are necessary because there are work that men can do better that women and vice versa even something related to the military.
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