Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]! ^^
Wow! I am so surprise with your answer. Yes, you are right we are living in one world. We are all the same.
We can do the things that the others can do. Do not limit yourself with one thing.
Keep on trying to do things that can help you to reach what you want.
I like your detemination to learn English that makes me happy with your sentences right now.
Just be careful with some words you are using. I know you can think another words that can fit with your sentences.
Congratulation for a good job [이름].
Have a nice day!
~~Teacher Kris
Dear teacher
>> Dear Teacher,
I\'m sorry I\'m so late for my homework.
>> I\'m sorry for passing my homework late.
What is the importance of learning a second language?
>> Correct
Before I answer this question, I would ask a question to you.
>> Before I am going to answer this question, I would like to ask another question to you.
How do you think about a circumstance for we are living?
>> What do you think about the circumstances we are living?
Do you have been listened that the world is one?
>> Have you been tried to listen that the world is one?
All right, we are living in only one world for everyone.
>> Correct
OR: Yes, we are living to only one world for each and evryone of us.
It means that our circumstance is too being same of everyone’s situations.
>> It means that our circumstances are being the same for everone\'s situation.
I remembered that when I was childhood, we went to anywhere by foot.
>> You mean to say: I can still remember when I was a child, my friends and I went to some places by foot.
But recently we know the real time news for the opposite side of the Earth through internet.
>> You mean to say: Recently, we discovered the real time of the opposite side of the Earth using internet.
The Internet almost has using on English.
>> Almost all of the sites in the internet are using English.
So, I’m still learning English to speak fluently.
>> That is why I am still learning to speak in English fluently.
Thank you
>> Thank you.
Best regards
>> Best regards,
[이름]
>> Correct
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