Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Marie.
Thank you for providing common mistakes by students and your corrections.
I'll try not to forget them.
In not less than 10 sentences, answer the following:
If you had $10,000 that you had to spend today (ONLY TODAY), how would you use it?
It is a fantastic imagination.
I already know how difficult it is to spend money at once.
In my opinion, spending money is needed to learn. Ha Ha!
First of all, I would reserve hotel restaurant for a dinner party with my family.
There, we would have a great dinner.
If the money lefts, I'd present gifts to all members of my family.
Because to give presents to them would be big pleasure.
In conclusion, I'd spend money to have quality time with my family.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I hope you won\'t encounter these common mistakes in our future classes. You did a great job in this composition. You have a creative imagination. Keep up the good work!
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT!Thank you for providing the common mistakes by students and your corrections.
>> CORRECT!I\'ll try not to forget them.
>> CORRECT!It is a fantastic imagination.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I have a fantastic imagination.I already know how difficult it is to spend money at once.
>> CORRECT!In my opinion, spending money is needed to learn. Ha Ha!
>> In my opinion, spending money is something that we need to learn.
First of all, I would reserve a hotel restaurant for a dinner party with my family.
>> CORRECT!There, we would have a great dinner.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We would have a great dinner there.If the money lefts, I\'d present gifts to all members of my family.
>> If there would be some money left, I would buy presents for my family.
Because to give presents to them would be big pleasure.
>> Because it would be a great pleasure for me to give them presents.
OR >> Because it would bring me great pleasure if I could give them presents.
In conclusion, I\'d spend the money to have quality time with my family.
>> CORRECT!
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