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Wow! $10,000 is about 11,000,000won. It's a large money to me. I'm happy just to imagine. I thought that for a while. I will donate $500 to charity. And I will go to Jeju-do. Jeju-do is the biggest island in Korea. Actually, I want to go to Western Europe. But I have to spend to only today. I would like to stay ao a premier hotel. I would like to use facilities of the hotel and to have quality food. I have not been there. $500 will do the trip.

Hello Clover! It makes me giddy just thinking about this huge amount of money too. Haha! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this. You did a great job here. There were minimal grammar mistakes; you just need to take note of the sentence pattern. Please check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Wow! >> CORRECT!$10,000 is about 11,000,000 won. >> CORRECT!It\'s a large money to me. >> It\'s a large amount of money for me.I\'m happy just to imagine. >> I\'m happy just by imagining it.I thought that for a while. >> I thought about that for a while.I will donate $500 to charity.>> CORRECT! And I will go to Jeju-do. >> CORRECT!Jeju-do is the biggest island in Korea. >> CORRECT!Actually, I want to go to Western Europe. >> CORRECT!But I have to spend to only today. >> But I have to spend it only today. I would like to stay ao a premier hotel. >> I would like to stay at a luxury hotel.I would like to use the facilities of the hotel and to have quality food. >> CORRECT!I have not been there. >> CORRECT!$500 will do the trip. >> CORRECT!