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2015-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

'People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.' Though That is irony, this situation is inevitable to live in a world. For example, when we were a young, We should go to the school even we don't want to go there. And now, We are forced to do something like drinking or flattering in a society. I don't like that, but that is unavoidable to all of us. :(

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

 

You are right there were times that we need to do things that we really don\'t like. This is a part of our routine in our lives. Maybe it is hard to do but we need to put our feet on that situation. This is to accomplish our tasks and to reach our goals that we want. I am happy on how you construct your words today. Just be careful on your verbs you are using. I know you can work on it.

Happy weekend!

 

~~Teacher Kris

 

\'People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.\'

>> Correct

Though That is irony, this situation is inevitable to live in a world.

>> That is ironic. This situation is  inevitable to live in a world.
For example, when we were a young, We should go to the school even we don\'t want to go there.

>> For example, when we were young, we used to go to the school even we didn\'t want to.
And now, We are forced to do something like drinking or flattering in a society.

>> Now, we were forced to do something like drinking or flattering in the society.
I don\'t like that, but that is unavoidable to all of us. :(

>> I don\'t like that but it is unavoidable for all of us. :(

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