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2015-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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1. When I saw this movie, I was disappointed because I thought it would be much better. 2. My wife and I are very pleased that you could come. 3. Linda became attracted to her new classmate David, a very handsome young man. 4. They were relieved when they heard that noone was hurt in the accident. 5. Victoria has no friends in this city. She feels very lonely. 6. Where were you? I was worried that something bad happened. 7. When my brother found out that they treated his girlfriend so badly, he was furious. 8. They were both very sad, so they had a tearful goodbye at the airport. 9. I was very disappointed with my test results. 10. I am 100% convinced that he will find another job.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]!

Happy day! Happy Friday!

Well, this one is perfect! You got it all correctly so good job!

See you minutes later! Have a great day ahead!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

1. When I saw this movie, I was disappointed because I thought it would be much better.
>> correct!
2. My wife and I are very pleased that you could come.
>> correct!
3. Linda became attracted to her new classmate David, a very handsome young man.
>> correct!
4. They were relieved when they heard that noone was hurt in the accident.
>> correct!
5. Victoria has no friends in this city. She feels very lonely.
>> correct!
6. Where were you? I was worried that something bad happened.
>> correct!
7. When my brother found out that they treated his girlfriend so badly, he was furious.
>> correct!
8. They were both very sad, so they had a tearful goodbye at the airport.
>> correct!
9. I was very disappointed with my test results.
>> correct!
10. I am 100% convinced that he will find another job.

>> correct!

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