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2015-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello~ My teacher,kathrin~ Do you have a nice weekends? I had studied at the library during the weekends. I feel hard to speaking and momorizing for proper expressive sentensive. Long time ago, The korea students had been taught that it is just got higher test score or test pass. For now, the korea english education is speaking in engilsh keep changing. also, I am trying to speaking and writting. Sometimes, I call or got call on skepe from phillippine friend. The friend is 20 old age and his' major philosopy at college. I think that english studing is helpfuled while comunication or message on skepe. I listened the music yesterday(21days) and today(22 days) of the song "surfin' U.S.A" of beach boys and "Dancing Queen" of ABBA. I feel that listen ablilty is more lack of english. I found that new words , sentence like "dig in", "lights are low" "getting in~ " "you turn' em on" and so on. I have a lot of that I don't know new expressive sentence. Thank your for kindness.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [Name]!

How are you doing? I had a good weekend since I was able to take a rest. How about you?

Well, I think you had a good one base from your story. And it is nice to know that you are listening English songs and learning new expressions. You have to keep that up Mr. [Name]. It is a good way to learn English too.

I will see you then later! Have a great day ahead! Take care!


Always,
Kathrine ^^ 


Hello~

>> correct!
 My teacher,kathrin~

>> My teacher Kathrine.
 Do you have a nice weekends?

>> Did you have a nice weekend?

>> or: Are you having a nice weekend?
 I had studied at the library during the weekends.

>> I studied in the library during the weekend.
 I feel hard to speaking and momorizing for proper expressive sentensive.

>> It was hard for me to speak and memorize the proper English expressions.
 Long time ago, The korea students had been taught that it is just got higher test score or test pass.

>> Long time ago, Korean students were taught just to get a higher test core and pass the test. 

>> or: Before, Korean students were taught just to get a higher test core and pass the test. 
 For now, the korea english education is speaking in engilsh keep changing.

>> But nowadays, the Korean English education keeps on changing as it is now about speaking in English.
 also, I am trying to speaking and writting.

>>  I am also trying to speak and write in English.
 Sometimes, I call or got call on skepe from phillippine friend.

>> Sometimes, I call or receive a call on Skype from a friend in the Philippines.
>> or: I sometimes call or receive a call on Skype from a Filipino friend.  

 The friend is 20 old age and his\' major philosopy at college.

>>  My friend is 20 years old and his major in college is Philosophy. 

>> or: He is 20 years old and his major is Philosophy in college.
 I think that english studing is helpfuled while comunication or message on skepe.

>> I think that studying English is helpful  while communicating or sending messages on Skype.
 I listened the music yesterday(21days) and today(22 days) of the song \"surfin\' U.S.A\" of beach boys and \"Dancing Queen\" of ABBA.

>>  I was listening to the songs \"surfin\' U.S.A\" of beach boys and \"Dancing Queen\" of ABBA during the weekend.
 I feel that listen ablilty is more lack of english.

>> I feel that I lack more in English listening ability/skill.  
 I found that new words , sentence like \"dig in\", \"lights are low\" \"getting in~ \" \"you turn\' em on\" and so on.

>> I found some new words and sentences like \'dig in\', \'lights are low\', \'getting in\', \'you turn \'em on\', and so on.
 I have a lot of that I don\'t know new expressive sentence.

>> There are a lot of new English expressions which I do not know.
 Thank your for kindness.

>> Thank you for your kindness.

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