homework~
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강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, Jane!
Thank you so much for doing your homework. Let's talk again later! Take care!
-Verna-
Hi, Veruna~^^
>> Hi, Verna! ^^
Please check the following sentence I made using "Possession" as my homework.
>> Ok.
When you are going to do shopping, If you feel your load burdensome, you can keep it on the equipped locker in the subway station.
>> When you go shopping and your baggage is burdensome, you can keep it in the locker in the subway station.
>> When you go shopping and you feel that you have a heavy load, you can keep it in the locker in the subway station.
Thank you so much~
See you tomorrow~! ^^
>> Ok. ( Welcome.)
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