homework
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Hello [이름].
Technology really mad a big change in our communication and in pour lives as well.
Thank you for your essay , I don know that this could help you with improving your skills in English
Thank you !!!!
T. Jeny
Hi Jeny
>>correct
It\'s very long time no see.
>>It\'s been a long time that we haven\'t talked with each other.
I miss you so much.^^
>>correct
In the past, We sent letter to people to inform our story.
>>In the past, we sent letters to tell our stories to other people.
We needed the time to get a receive.
>>It will take time before we can receive it.
And We could call the friends who lived on abroad.
>>And we can just call our friends who live abroad.
Nowaday, we can also use to write a letter and call
>>Nowadays, we can still write and call our friends.
But we can add to technology to contact to others.
>>But now with the sue of technology.
We can send letter on the net.
>>We can send letters through the internet.
\\So, the people can see the massage instantly, And They can give the answer right now.
>>So that, the person can receive the message instantly, and they can also answer right away.
And we call the friends with seeing to them.
>>We can also call our friends for an appointment.
Technology make change our interact culture.
>>Technology made a big change in our communication.
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