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2015-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good afternoon, Teacher Marie. I just came back home from the school. These days, it began warm. Spring already seems to arrive. In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following: How do you relax after a busy week? Give specific details. Honestly, I can't relax even more on the weekend than during the week. During the week, my husband and son aren't at home for the day time. So I can have my time and relax. However, I have to take care of them on the weekend. For example, I usually prepare meals for them 3 times a day. How can I relax enough with them? But that doesn't mean I dislike to be with them.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! I forgot that you are a working (and studying ^^) mom! Of course you cannot relax even during the weekend. I want to give you a hug and a pat in the back. Kudos to you for keeping it together. You can still take a breather every now and then, though. Close your eyes and take a nap for 30 minutes or take a walk around a park, if you can. Good luck! Please check my corrections below! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good afternoon, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT! I just came back home from the school. >> CORRECT! >> Remove \'the\'These days, it began warm. >> It\'s getting warmer these days. Spring already seems to arrive. >> It seems like spring is already here. Honestly, I can\'t relax even more on the weekend than during the week. >> CORRECT! During the week, my husband and son aren\'t at home for the day time. >> During the week, my husband and son aren\'t at home during the day. So I can have my time and relax. >> So I can have some personal time and relax. However, I have to take care of them on the weekend. >> CORRECT! For example, I usually prepare meals for them 3 times a day. >> CORRECT! How can I relax enough with them? >> How can I relax if they\'re here? But that doesn\'t mean I dislike to be with them. >> But that doesn\'t mean I don\'t like being with them.  

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