Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, Teacher Marie.
I just came back home from the school.
These days, it began warm.
Spring already seems to arrive.
In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following:
How do you relax after a busy week? Give specific details.
Honestly, I can't relax even more on the weekend than during the week.
During the week, my husband and son aren't at home for the day time.
So I can have my time and relax.
However, I have to take care of them on the weekend.
For example, I usually prepare meals for them 3 times a day.
How can I relax enough with them?
But that doesn't mean I dislike to be with them.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! I forgot that you are a working (and studying ^^) mom! Of course you cannot relax even during the weekend. I want to give you a hug and a pat in the back. Kudos to you for keeping it together. You can still take a breather every now and then, though. Close your eyes and take a nap for 30 minutes or take a walk around a park, if you can. Good luck!
Please check my corrections below!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good afternoon, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! I just came back home from the school.
>> CORRECT!
>> Remove \'the\'These days, it began warm.
>> It\'s getting warmer these days.
Spring already seems to arrive.
>> It seems like spring is already here.
Honestly, I can\'t relax even more on the weekend than during the week.
>> CORRECT! During the week, my husband and son aren\'t at home for the day time.
>> During the week, my husband and son aren\'t at home during the day.
So I can have my time and relax.
>> So I can have some personal time and relax.
However, I have to take care of them on the weekend.
>> CORRECT! For example, I usually prepare meals for them 3 times a day.
>> CORRECT! How can I relax enough with them?
>> How can I relax if they\'re here?
But that doesn\'t mean I dislike to be with them.
>> But that doesn\'t mean I don\'t like being with them.
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