Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Roxy.
It was a nice meeting for me. :)
I'm really pleased that you think the talking was a joy. At this point, I'm wondering who will check this composition. haha
Anyway, if we get a chance once more, we may have more conversation using the Skype.
See you. :D
<Homework>
The name of this school is FIS. There are more than one thousand students here from all over the world. (from all over the world > what is it meaning?) The world, many students don't know English, so they have ESL lessons. You'll like your new school.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Hmm, don\'t worry. I checked your composition but then I asked teacher Roxy to read it and write a comment. ^_^
~T. Jessie~
Hello Roxy.
>> Correct!It was a nice meeting for me. :)
>> Correct!I\'m really pleased that you think the talking was a joy.
>> I\'m really pleased that you think that talking is a joy.
At this point, I\'m wondering who will check this composition. haha
>> Correct!Anyway, if we get a chance once more, we may have more conversation using the Skype.
>> Anyway, if we\'ll get another chance, we may have more conversations using Skype.See you. :D>> Correct!<Homework>The name of this school is FIS.
>> Correct!
There are more than one thousand students here from all over the world.
>> Correct!
(from all over the world > what is it meaning?) >> (from all over the world > What does it mean?)
>> It means students who came from different countries in our world.
The world, many students don\'t know English, so they have ESL lessons. >> Many students don\'t know English so they have ESL lessons.
You\'ll like your new school.
>> Do you like your new school?
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