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Good morning Ms. [이름]!
Well, can act in our own self-interest as long as it does not affect others. But I guess, I everything we do, we always have that kind of \"self-interest\".
Anyways, see you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Do you AGREE or DISAGREE that \"a person always acts in his own self-interest.\" Why or why not?
I agree with someparts.
>> I agree in some parts.
A person can act in his own self-interest at least it does\'t make others uncomfortable.
>> correct! (doesn\'t)
>> or: A person can in his own self-interest as long as it doesn\'t make others feel uncomfortable.
but I think we cant ALWAYS act what we like because we need to follow the rules with others.
>> correct!
>> or: But I think we could not always act what we want because we need to follow rules with others.
If we don\'t care about others, we can be involed with others.
>> correct! (involved)
So we need to think when we can act what we like or not.
>> correct!
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