Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Marie.
Thank you for wishing me better condition.
Today, I wrote some sentences for my essay abstract in English.
Could you read and review some of my sentences?
Mencius insisted rule of virtue which is summarized that the king has to reign his country throughout pursuing benevolence and righteousness, not profits.
This way of thinking was not different from Confucius in the way that Confucius considered a man who governed his people throughout pursuing virtue as a ideal political leader.
However, these two thinkers adopted very different methods of persuasion.
Mencius approached this problem by generalizing, whereas Confucius discussed it in terms of norms and oughtness.
In this respect, this paper argues that Mencius tried to theorize the rule of virtue.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! I really hope I could finally hear your normally sweet voice tomorrow. I don\'t like the husky version of your voice. Haha! Take care of yourself. Please check my corrections below.
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~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! Thank you for wishing me a better condition.
>> CORRECT! Today, I wrote some sentences for my essay abstract in English.
>> CORRECT! Could you read and review some of my sentences?>> CORRECT! Mencius insisted rule of virtue which is summarized that the king has to reign his country throughout pursuing benevolence and righteousness, not profits.
>> Mencius insisted on the rule of virtue which explains that the king has to reign his country through the pursuit of benevolence and righteousness, not profits.
This way of thinking was not different from Confucius, in the way that Confucius considered a man who governed his people throughout pursuing virtue as a ideal political leader.
>> This way of thinking was not different from Confucius, in the way that Confucius considered a man who governed his people, through the pursuit of virtue, as an ideal political leader.
However, these two thinkers adopted very different methods of persuasion.
>> CORRECT! Mencius approached this problem by generalizing, whereas Confucius discussed it in terms of norms and oughtness.
>> CORRECT! In this respect, this paper argues that Mencius tried to theorize the rule of virtue.
>> CORRECT!
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