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2015-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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If I can eliminate on weakness in my life, I want to eliminate a fear. I am very shy when I met new people or some situations. So I won't go on rides in amusement park. I also won't watch horror movies or sad movies. In my country, many bad accidents occur. I can't know a safe place for my family. And If I can't pray everyday, I can't keep on my life.

강사 첨삭

Good morning! Thanks for sharing this to me. I am glad to read it. I hope you can overcome whatever fears you have. Let God guide you.  have a great day! ~T. Jessie~ If I can eliminate on weakness in my life, I want to eliminate a fear. >> If I can eliminate a weakness in my life, I want to eliminate fear. I am very shy when I met new people or some situations. >> I am very shy when I meet new people or some situations. So I won\'t go on rides in amusement park. >> So I don\'t go on rides in amusement parks. I also won\'t watch horror movies or sad movies. >> I also don\'t watch horror movies or sad movies. In my country, many bad accidents occur. >> Correct! I can\'t know a safe place for my family. >> I don\'t know a safe place for my family. And If I can\'t pray everyday, I can\'t keep on my life. >> And if I can\'t pray everyday, I can\'t keep on with my life.

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