Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What a quiet night!
I enjoyed studing at the library.:)
I have not gone to there since I graduated on my high school.
I used to go there in order to study for enter the university.
The library is near a college and a high school.
I saw some students who were wearing their uniforms.
They looked so active and I missed my school days.
When I was wearing the uniform, I was tired of wearing same clothes.
But, come to think about now, the school uniform is the most useful dress ever.
I often miss wearing the school uniform, but it imight be too small now and I forget it.
It is endless to miss the past.
I will try to be pleased with living now.
Have a good dream and see you tomorrow.
Good night :)☆
1. The alarm won't work unless you turn it on.
2. We got a second key in case we lost the first one.
3. Call this number in case of emergency.
4. Take your vaccination certificate with you in case they ask for it at the airport.
5. I'll see you at the meeting next week unless it's cancelled before then.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful day to you, Sumin!^^
How are you doing? I hope you are doing well. I also have the same feeling.
I also missed going to school and wearing my uniform.
It must be true that you only know what you got until it\'s gone.
In our case, we miss it because we got used to studying.
However, we must look ahead in our lives and not live in the past.
It is okay to miss the things in the past but we should always remember to live in the present and look at the future with positivity.
I hope that despite your busy schedule reviewing for the IELTS you still find time to enjoy your life.
Learning the English language is easy if you put your heart into it.
Try to master the ways to create grammatically correct sentences.
You will benefit from it especially on writing and speaking.
It is difficult to start at first but always remember that it\'s just hard but not impossible! See you soon!
Teacher Carmen^^
What a quiet night!
>> Correct!
I enjoyed studing at the library.:)
>> I enjoyed studying in the library. :)
I have not gone to there since I graduated on my high school.
>> I have not been here since I graduated high school.
I used to go there in order to study for enter the university.
>>I used to go here to study for the entrance test in the university.
The library is near a college and a high school.
>> The library is both near a college and a high school.
I saw some students who were wearing their uniforms.
>> Correct!
They looked so active and I missed my school days.
>> They looked so active and I suddenly missed my school days.
When I was wearing the uniform, I was tired of wearing same clothes.
>> When I was wearing a uniform, I feel tired of wearing the same kind of clothes.
But, come to think about now, the school uniform is the most useful dress ever.
>> But come to think about it now, the school uniform was the most useful dress ever.
I often miss wearing the school uniform, but it imight be too small now and I forget it.
>> I often miss wearing the school uniform, but it might be too small for me now and I totally forgot about it already.
It is endless to miss the past.
>> It is an endless process to miss the past.
I will try to be pleased with living now.
>> I will try to be pleased with living my life now.
Have a good dream and see you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
Good night :)☆
>> Good night! :)☆
1. The alarm won\'t work unless you turn it on.
>> Correct!
2. We got a second key in case we lost the first one.
>> Correct!
3. Call this number in case of emergency.
>> Correct!
4. Take your vaccination certificate with you in case they ask for it at the airport.
>> Correct!
5. I\'ll see you at the meeting next week unless it\'s cancelled before then.
>> Correct!
How are you doing? I hope you are doing well. I also have the same feeling.
I also missed going to school and wearing my uniform.
It must be true that you only know what you got until it\'s gone.
In our case, we miss it because we got used to studying.
However, we must look ahead in our lives and not live in the past.
It is okay to miss the things in the past but we should always remember to live in the present and look at the future with positivity.
I hope that despite your busy schedule reviewing for the IELTS you still find time to enjoy your life.
Learning the English language is easy if you put your heart into it.
Try to master the ways to create grammatically correct sentences.
You will benefit from it especially on writing and speaking.
It is difficult to start at first but always remember that it\'s just hard but not impossible! See you soon!
Teacher Carmen^^
What a quiet night!
>> Correct!
I enjoyed studing at the library.:)
>> I enjoyed studying in the library. :)
I have not gone to there since I graduated on my high school.
>> I have not been here since I graduated high school.
I used to go there in order to study for enter the university.
>>I used to go here to study for the entrance test in the university.
The library is near a college and a high school.
>> The library is both near a college and a high school.
I saw some students who were wearing their uniforms.
>> Correct!
They looked so active and I missed my school days.
>> They looked so active and I suddenly missed my school days.
When I was wearing the uniform, I was tired of wearing same clothes.
>> When I was wearing a uniform, I feel tired of wearing the same kind of clothes.
But, come to think about now, the school uniform is the most useful dress ever.
>> But come to think about it now, the school uniform was the most useful dress ever.
I often miss wearing the school uniform, but it imight be too small now and I forget it.
>> I often miss wearing the school uniform, but it might be too small for me now and I totally forgot about it already.
It is endless to miss the past.
>> It is an endless process to miss the past.
I will try to be pleased with living now.
>> I will try to be pleased with living my life now.
Have a good dream and see you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
Good night :)☆
>> Good night! :)☆
1. The alarm won\'t work unless you turn it on.
>> Correct!
2. We got a second key in case we lost the first one.
>> Correct!
3. Call this number in case of emergency.
>> Correct!
4. Take your vaccination certificate with you in case they ask for it at the airport.
>> Correct!
5. I\'ll see you at the meeting next week unless it\'s cancelled before then.
>> Correct!
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