homework

Hello [이름],

thank you for you homework. It is really nice to spend time with our family. I think, it will really complete our lives.

I do hope and pray that I can also spend more time with my family as well.

Have a great day!!!

T. Jeny

Hi Jeny^^

>>correct
Have you been spending happy time with your family?

>>correct
Today, I spend my all time with my baby.

>>Today, I spend all of my time with my baby.

I feel very tired. But It was good time.

>>I feel very tired, but it was a good time.
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I like to go to the traditional market with my family.

>>I like going to the traditional market with my family.
I know it is more convenience to go department store compared to traditional market.
>>I know that it more convenient to go to the department store compared to the traditional market.

It has a wide parking place and more clean.

>>It has a wide parking area and it\'s cleaner.

But the traditional market more interested.

>>But traditional market is more interesting.

 And We can deal the price with seller. And there are many delicious food.

>>We can make bargain if we will but something and there are many delicious food.
But to my regret, I don\'t go to the market frequently.

>>But unfortunately I don\'t go to the market nowadays.