Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My goal is a singer.
5 years a go I will middle school student.
So I will busy.
I will go to the kpopstar.
And I will a singer.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I didn\'t know that you wanted to be a singer.
I think, you really have a beautiful voice.
I hope you can sing in our class for me to hear your beautiful voice.
Anyway, thank you for doing your homework.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
My goal is a singer.
>> My goal is to become a singer.5 years a go I will middle school student.
>> Five years from now, I will be in Middle School.So I will busy.
>> So, I will be very busy.I will go to the kpopstar.
>> I wanted to be a K-pop star.And I will a singer.
>> So I will be a singer.
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