homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
Well, I wish you luck in the decision you made.
Today is a new day and a new week so make the most out of it.
See you again tomorrow!
Thanks for your time!
You take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Do you agree that one MUST learn English to be competitive in the society?
Of course, we need to learn English to be competitive in the society.
>> correct!
It is essential now.
>> correct!
>> or; It is essential nowadays.
But according to the person\'s need, its degree is different.
>> But it has different degrees depending on the person\'s needs.
For example, If a man works for a simple job, it is no matter whether he has knowledge or not.
>> For example, If a man works for a simple job, it is does not matter whether he has knowledge or not.
But a man who has to make a journey to abroad often, he should be good at communication in English.
>> But a make who goes abroad often, he should be good at communicating in English.
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