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2015-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher Marie. We have a Philippine holiday this week. It is a good news for you. From my experience, it was the best pleasure in my past work life. Anyway, it's joyful Monday! Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms: 1. Jump on the bandwagon 2. Keep something at bay 3. Kill two birds with one stone 1. When you don't now what to do, it's not bad way to jump on the bandwagon. 2. I expect that their street demonstration would remain peaceful. But if a violent demonstration takes place illegally, it can be needed to keep them at bay. 3. For this semester, I choose the topic that could cover the related two subjects. I guess I can kill two birds with one stone.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! After having such a busy weekend, I would have to agree with you. Thank goodness for this coming holiday! :) Thanks for doing your homework. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT! We have a Philippine holiday this week. >> CORRECT! It is a good news for you. >> It is good news for you. From my experience, it was the best pleasure in my past work life. >> From my experience, it was the best thing about working. Anyway, it\'s a joyful Monday! >> CORRECT! 1. When you don\'t now what to do, it\'s not bad way to jump on the bandwagon. >> When you don\'t know what to do, it\'s not bad to jump on the bandwagon. 2. I expect that their street demonstration would remain peaceful. >> I expect their street demonstration to remain peaceful. But if a violent demonstration takes place illegally, it can be needed to keep them at bay. >> If a violent and illegal demonstration takes place, we might need to keep them at bay. 3. For this semester, I choose the topic that could cover the related two subjects. >> For this semester, I chose a topic that could cover two related subjects. I guess I can kill two birds with one stone. >> CORRECT!  

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