Homework

Hello, Teacher Marie. In Korea, today's weather is not good. It seems to rain soon. I have a class in the afternoon, so I'm a little on my mind. Anyway, have a nice day, Teacher! Can you think of a time when a failure actually worked out well? Tell me about it. Many people say that failure is the mother of success or the impetus for success. However, I think whether a failure work out well is different for each person. We can learn a lesson from the other people's failure, even if we don't experience failure directly. Moreover, failure can make you lose your nerve whereas even a small success gives you a sense of achievement. Therefore, I'd like to recommend that you try not to experience failure if possible. Instead, you need to prepare carefully to strive for success. In conclusion, failure is just a bad thing and never can be a good thing.

Hello Kaylee! Thanks for putting in your two cents about this topic. I slightly agree with what you said here. However, I tend to learn more from my mistakes and failures. But that\'s just me. ^^ Like what you said, every individual is different when it comes to success and failure. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT!In Korea, today\'s weather is not good. >> CORRECT!It seems to rain soon. >> It seems like it would rain soon.I have a class in the afternoon, so I\'m a little on my mind. >> I have a class in the afternoon so I\'m a little bit preoccupied. Anyway, have a nice day, Teacher! >> CORRECT!Many people say that failure is the mother of success or the impetus for success. >> CORRECT!However, I think whether a failure work out well is different for each person. >> However, I think that whether or not a failure would work out well is different for each person. We can learn a lesson from the other people\'s failure, even if we don\'t experience failure directly. >> CORRECT! OR >> Even if we don\'t experience failure directly, we can learn our lesson from other people\'s failures. - betterMoreover, failure can make you lose your nerve whereas even a small success gives you a sense of achievement. >> CORRECT! OR >> Whereas failure can make you lose your nerve, a small success gives you a sense of achievement.Therefore, I\'d like to recommend that you try not to experience failure if possible. >> Therefore, I would like to recommend that you avoid failure as much as possible. Instead, you need to prepare carefully to strive for success. >> CORRECT!In conclusion, failure is just a bad thing and never can be a good thing. >> CORRECT!