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A rainy Tuesday Jessie...
I like rain, but I don't like when I go somewhere. All clothes are wet while I walk, I hold an umbrella though. Besides, I forgot to take an umbrella, so I had to go back home. It was really annoying. Do you like rain? I really love it if I'm staying home. Sounds, moods... etc.
Anyway, see you tomrrow!
<Essay>
Why do you ask me these questions? It's quite hard to respond, you know... I haven't thought of it before. Because, when I saw a beatiful woman, I just think, 'She is beautiful'. And I'm not intereted in celebrities. So the colcusion is I can't choose one. kkk
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
Thanks for sharing this.
Like I told you before, I don\'t like it when it is raining. ^_^
Why can\'t you choose one??? Hahaha
Well, I hope you will meet the most beautiful woman soon!^__^
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
A rainy Tuesday Jessie...
>> Correct!I like rain, but I don\'t like when I go somewhere.
>> I like rain, but I don\'t like it when I go somewhere.
All clothes are wet while I walk, I hold an umbrella though.
>> All clothes get wet while I walk even though I\'m holding an umbrella.
Besides, I forgot to take an umbrella, so I had to go back home.
>> Correct!
It was really annoying.
>> Correct!
Do you like rain? >> Correct!
I really love it if I\'m staying home.
>> Correct!
Sounds, moods... etc.
>> The sound, mood, etc.Anyway, see you tomrrow!
>> Anyway, see you tomorrow!<Essay>Why do you ask me these questions?
>> Correct!
It\'s quite hard to respond, you know... I haven\'t thought of it before.
>> Correct!
Because, when I saw a beatiful woman, I just think, \'She is beautiful\'.
>> Because, when I see a beautiful woman, I just think, \'She is beautiful.\'
And I\'m not intereted in celebrities.
>> Correct!
So the colcusion is I can\'t choose one. kkk
>> Correct!
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