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2015-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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A rainy Tuesday Jessie... I like rain, but I don't like when I go somewhere. All clothes are wet while I walk, I hold an umbrella though. Besides, I forgot to take an umbrella, so I had to go back home. It was really annoying. Do you like rain? I really love it if I'm staying home. Sounds, moods... etc. Anyway, see you tomrrow! <Essay> Why do you ask me these questions? It's quite hard to respond, you know... I haven't thought of it before. Because, when I saw a beatiful woman, I just think, 'She is beautiful'. And I'm not intereted in celebrities. So the colcusion is I can't choose one. kkk

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  Good morning [이름]! Thanks for sharing this. Like I told you before, I don\'t like it when it is raining. ^_^ Why can\'t you choose one??? Hahaha Well, I hope you will meet the most beautiful woman soon!^__^ See you later! ~T. Jessie~ A rainy Tuesday Jessie... >> Correct!I like rain, but I don\'t like when I go somewhere. >> I like rain, but I don\'t like it when I go somewhere. All clothes are wet while I walk, I hold an umbrella though. >> All clothes get  wet while I walk even though I\'m holding an umbrella. Besides, I forgot to take an umbrella, so I had to go back home. >> Correct! It was really annoying. >> Correct! Do you like rain? >> Correct! I really love it if I\'m staying home. >> Correct! Sounds, moods... etc. >> The sound, mood, etc.Anyway, see you tomrrow! >> Anyway, see you tomorrow!<Essay>Why do you ask me these questions? >> Correct! It\'s quite hard to respond, you know... I haven\'t thought of it before. >> Correct! Because, when I saw a beatiful woman, I just think, \'She is beautiful\'. >> Because, when I see a  beautiful woman, I just think, \'She is beautiful.\' And I\'m not intereted in celebrities. >> Correct! So the colcusion is I can\'t choose one. kkk >> Correct!  

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