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2015-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Teacher! It is raining today. Korean people had been worried about a drought for a long time. I'm not that glad because I am not a farmer. ^^ Someone would be happy because of this spring rain. Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms: 1. Make a long story short 2. Method to my madness 3. Miss the boat 1. You have a tendency to ramble on about everything. I think you need to make a long story short. 2. Usually, I don't take notes in class. Some wonder why don't I take notes, but I have a method to my madness. 3. You can think that you miss the boat. Nevertheless, I believe that one door closes while the other door opens.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I wish it would rain in my city too. It\'s summer time here in my country so the temperature has been steadily rising these past few weeks. It\'s so hot.  I love the examples that you gave here! They were spot on! I really enjoyed reading them. Great job! I think I already missed the boat on getting married. Hahaha! What about you? Which \'boat\' did you miss?  Thanks for being so diligent with your homework. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher! >> CORRECT!It is raining today. >> CORRECT!Korean people had been worried about a drought for a long time. >> CORRECT!I\'m not that glad because I am not a farmer. ^^ >> CORRECT!Someone would be happy because of this spring rain. >> CORRECT! OR >> Someone out there might be happy because of spring rain.1. You have a tendency to ramble on about everything. >> CORRECT! I think you need to make a long story short. >> CORRECT!2. Usually, I don\'t take notes in class. >> CORRECT! Some wonder why don\'t I take notes, but I have a method to my madness. >> CORRECT! OR >> Some wonder why, but I have a method to my madness.3. You can think that you miss the boat. >> You might think that you already missed the boat. Nevertheless, I believe that one door closes while the other door opens. >> Nevertheless, I believe that when one door closes, another door opens.  

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