homework ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Match the two columns to have a meaningful sentence. Put your answer on the space provided.
While I was driving home the rain started
But he can't afford buying a new one. Bob's car is old
When he was young he was a famous hockey player
Before I was awarded the literature prize I wrote many books
Because the director did not show up they had to cancel the meeting
Who won last year's race. No one knows for sure
If you don't try hard you won't succeed
He went out without an umbrella. Although it was raining
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you again for this homework. What happened? It looks like you were sleepy when you did your homework because the sentences are almost correct however, they lack punctuation marks. Remember that a sentence is not considered a complete sentence without having punctuation marks at the end. Don\'t forget about that, OK? Anyway, you have done your part and that is what I really appreciate about you. Good job!
Bye for now and see you the next time.
~~Teacher Kris
While I was driving home the rain started
>> While I was driving home the rain started.
But he can\'t afford buying a new one. Bob\'s car is old>> Bob\'s car is old but he can\'t afford buying new one.
When he was young he was a famous hockey player>> When he was young, he was a famous hockey player.
Before I was awarded the literature prize I wrote many books>> I wrote many books before I was awarded the literature prize.
>> Before I was awarded the literature prize, I wrote many books.
Because the director did not show up they had to cancel the meeting>> They had to cancel the meeting because the director did not show up.
>> Because the director did not show up, they had to cancel the meeting.Who won last year\'s race. No one knows for sure>> No one knows for sure who won the last year\'s race.
If you don\'t try hard you won\'t succeed>> If you don\'t try hard you won\'t succeed.
He went out without an umbrella. Although it was raining
>> Although it was raining, he went out without an umbrella.
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